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Wallace Spearmon came 4th place in the men's 200m race. He didn't give up while running and he was proud of himself. His family was cheering for him and he never gives up. He trains hard everyday to win the race. he works hard and trains every single day to beat Bolt in the men's 200m race. His body was strong and he pushed himself to win the race.His face was like “I can do this I will never give up”. He looked confident and ready to race.His emotion was happy and confident. He was thinking that he has to never give up. He was feeling confident.