Miss Garden pulled out the bread and salt and a creamy milk and are container and plate to. We are learning about butter.The butter is soft and creamy when you make your own. Butter is fun to make.
The butter is easy to make because it's just two ingredients. The two ingredients is one creamy milk and salt.
WALT: write an introduction that orientates and hooks in the reader.
I agree your introduction is clear, we just need to work on hooking in your reader. Try and use some of the techniques we have been practising in class Andrew.
ReplyDeleteHi Andrew I really like your photo of you and your friends of Germaine, Joshua and Charles and how come you didn't tell me of what you did in class Andrew
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